Suikoden II Chapter 3

Friday, 16 April 2010

Hey Suikoden Fans
Another chapter of our favorite Suikoden Series.
But I must say, some of the pages are a bit blur, I try to sharped it, and the outcome are a bit disappointment
If there are some high quality raw, I'm planning to remake them.
But for now on, just read and enjoy
:D

7 comments:

Jolyn said...

Thank you for doing this :)

I must note though that there are some grammatical errors here and there and I do wish you'd use the light novel name "Riou" for the hero instead of "Tao" :x I'm happy to offer my assistance as a proof reader though. :)

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Anonymous said...

Thanks for doing this! Here are some mistakes I see:

Page 7: "We wont have time to find another way" -- missing punctuation

Page 8: "What should we do, Jowy"-- ?
"If this continues we will get caught"
If this continues, we will get caught.

"We had to escape by jumping into the waterfall"
We have to escape by jumping into the waterfall.

Page 9: "It's the end"
Missing punctuation.

"They already here!"
They are (or) They're

Page 11:
"If we make it... But, somehow get separate..."
Separated

The comma is kinda needless.

"Let's return to this spot" -- missing punctuation.

"We promise to this place" Missing punctuation and it sounds kinda tacky. I think I know what it means though.

Maybe "We promise by this mark." (Trying to remember the game content, lol.)

Page 12:

"... Don't worry" -- No punctuation.

Page 13:

"Both of us will survive" Either use a period or an ellipsis (...).

"We're always be together, right?"
We will/We'll always be together, right?

Anonymous said...

XD That was for chapter 1, sorry.

straydog12 said...
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straydog12 said...

don't worry about that
thx a lot
it will help me to improve

on page 9 is written
おしまいだ which mean It is an end
I'm bit confuse to wrote what.

@Jolyn I don't have right to change that
The name actually came from the author
if you want to be a proof reader, be my guest
I'm in a need of staff right now

Anonymous said...

Thanks for scanlating this, but I have to say...um...where's the link for chapter 3?

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